Core Narrative 1

TITLE: “The Find”

CORRESPONDING MACRO-STORY BEAT: Monkey Wrench

'''LOGLINE: Creation doesn’t always get it right in the galaxy where Creators are supposed to create worlds not divide them. Creators can make mistakes and darken a world instead of bringing it light'''

SHORT STORY SYNOPSIS: 

Part 1: A creator pro creates with one of his beings that he created. Jonah Cloud-Destine, has created a galaxy called Soargun and a planet that has life called Ezusus. He creates Ahnii a being in the image of his wife, however, she is more revised, younger and submissive to her creator. Not at all like his wife Snow. Jonah finds himself spending more and more time in the lab evolving her and the planet to fit her needs and expectations. Jonah has reached a level of Creators where he can actually visit his world in physical form.

Part 2: As Jonah continues to become obsessed with his work his wife becomes more aware of his new work habits. He seems more distant. He makes the mistake of calling her Ahnii. She questions him, who is Ahnii? He explains that she is a being he created but tries to reassure Snow he is just tired from working so much and will pull back from his hours. Snow, being an Enforcement Academy Professor, is weary of his answer, behavior and seeks help from her best friend Salliie Flourwing a small crimes investigator at the Enforcement Base Station. Sallie does some snooping and finds Jonah not in his lab so she enters. She finds Jonah inside his world in a loving embrace of the sexual kind with Ahnii.

Part 3 Saliie is in disbelief and quickly calls Snow to explain what she has found. Snow is heartbroken and needs answers. She rushes over to the Lab and finds Saliie gathering evidence, Jonah is still in his world with Ahnii and has no idea that his love affair has been discovered. Saliie warns Snow to not look but she does, and to her surprise she sees that Ahnii looks just like her. She becomes angry and starts to destroy the lab. Jonah can feel it and quickly returns. It’s a heated scene, nothing is reconciled and Snow is a woman with revenge on her mind. Saliie must do her job and turn over the Findings to the council.

GENRE: Sci-Fi/Fantasy

PROTAGONIST: Jonah Cloud-destine

ANTAGONIST: 1. Snow Cloud-Destine 2. Sallie Hieghts